You are right, the WWF is working hard to protect Saimaa Ringed Seals. You have included some basic information about what the WWF is doing, perhaps next time you could explain why they are building snowbanks. Think about how the snowbanks help the seals...
I can see that you have written a bit about what success the WWF has had, however it is not clear. Did you mean that they were successful in helping the Saimaa Ringed Seals? How do you know? In order to gain full points for this activity please include some detailed information about whether the WWF has been successful in helping the seals survive.
Keep persevering and working hard, I know you can do this. I look forward to reading your edited post.
Malo e lelei Betty,
ReplyDeleteYou are right, the WWF is working hard to protect Saimaa Ringed Seals. You have included some basic information about what the WWF is doing, perhaps next time you could explain why they are building snowbanks. Think about how the snowbanks help the seals...
I can see that you have written a bit about what success the WWF has had, however it is not clear. Did you mean that they were successful in helping the Saimaa Ringed Seals? How do you know?
In order to gain full points for this activity please include some detailed information about whether the WWF has been successful in helping the seals survive.
Keep persevering and working hard, I know you can do this. I look forward to reading your edited post.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.